Friday, March 4, 2016

SOL #4


There was a kite that had a big bite and started to fight with the dog and his spite so that he mite get another bite.  After the bite he had a big fright looking at Mcknight who had a big egg white on his flee bite. After the fright he went to MR Right and had a delight when he saw the bomb site and ate an inch mite and then had quite a right to get another big bite.

1 comment:

  1. I like how it is all rhyming with the same word, as this adds an interesting aspect to the poem. I also like how each sentence flows smoothly into the next. Nice poem!

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